Comic #355

Last comic of January! As celebration: here, have an action comic!

Writing a script in terms of choreography rather than dialogue is always a strange experience. Though making this scene wasn’t quite as ridiculous as, say, the wasp battle scene with June and Maxx, it is the most intricate I’ve gotten with Maxx’s swordfighting. Dude has some serious moves. I think the overall flow works pretty well, though I’ve got some things to learn still.

Also, some of you might find it strange that I depict Cyril using magic that I never showed Flower teaching him. Here’s the thing: I don’t want to set a precedent where I have to explicitly show Cyril learning every spell in his bag of tricks, because having a ‘Cyril learns a spell’ comic every five comics would soon get very tiring for everyone involved. So… he learned it off-screen, ok?

-Jesse

81 thoughts on “Comic #355”

    1. I’ll just add that Hannah was in danger and most movies show wizards using spells they don’t know to save loved ones from harm 😛 so no worries Jesse! as always keep up the good work.

    1. It was a spell that produced a red cloud of vapourised Bromine that turns all body tissues, including bone, into- well, a pile of body tissues.

      1. Come, followers, and behold my infinite intelligence.
        However, the exact spell is named in the description of the next comic, It’s not exactly a good name, but it’s official.

  1. What kind of spell is that, though? I see a ‘bomf’ and a lot of red, but I can’t really tell what’s happening, besides what’s probably quite a bit of owie.
    Also, what was the ‘tink’ sound effect caused by? I know it’s indicative of the axe being lightly rested on his head, but to the best of my knowledge Cyril’s head ain’t made o’ metal, so what caused this hurr sound?

    1. While I do like that Cyril is being useful, I’m not sure I like that he’s just casually flinging magic around. It seems like the sort of thing you would save for some crucial, game-changing moment, not just “Oh btw, Cyril’s compotent now”. Still a good comic though.

      1. I agree, he stepped up from bunnies to vikings quite fast. A good recovery for this would be to have something un-expected come about because of it. (Ex: head on backward, fugi growth, change mod type, size change, etc. [for the viking, not Cyril])

  2. I think the “BWEEN”ed Viking went from UN-dead, to RE-dead.

    Great comic. I think ally and guidey are helping each other out on the concentration of their technique. No bunnies, no dead Tyrone; there on there way to becoming a great posse.

  3. I think the Arms Dealer should be reintroduced while Hannah, Cyril and Maxx are still on the ship or near it. Either that they find him captive and free him, or he comes out of no where and saves the day.

      1. Hah, I can’t believe you brought that up again. No one’s guessed it yet 🙂 And I’m never telling you. Mostly because it’ll be a huge letdown if I do.

  4. I just thought about a theory: Maybe Aley was a former pirate. It sang it’s own version of the drunken sailor song. It gives ale and I don’t know if pirates like ale but I know that pirates like rum and I don’t know the difference between ale and rum. Aley had a fake beard to maybe hide it’s gender since female women used to dress as men to become pirates. You can find a lot of kegs on a pirate ship so maybe Aley slept in one of those. It probably got kicked of the ship because it destroyed it with it’s lazer beams. Sorry for the wall of text.

  5. OR MAYBE instead of Cyril learning the spell off-cam Flower just told him, right then, some magical incantation for him to improv on. His dialogue was just never showed.

  6. What was he trying to do exactly? It looks like his spell raised the beheaded zombie viking captain; but that couldn’t have been his intention (and he didn’t seem to expect the logical consequence, so it really couldn’t have been that).

    Maybe he bomfed some other zombie viking, but given the layout of the ship I don’t see how it arrived there. Maybe it just spawned off screen while the camera was focusing on Maxx. Cyril, for your safety, you should **always** stay right in the center of the panels. Monsters can only spawn off panel, so when **you** are off-panel, a monster can spawn right on top of you.

  7. Awesome! a battle of consisting undead vikings against maxx with the legendary blade of grass(and a gravity potion, panel 7&8), mythical ale fairy, a guide with arcane nature’s gift and an NPC that can insta-heal them. well i saw a not balanced battle here but still the fight we’ve wait is here. good post jesse

  8. what was the magic supposed to do? Second of all, where did Maxx get the gravitation potion? Last of all, where is the dryad and the merchant and all the other people?

    1. You forgot? June, the Dryad, left them because she lost all hope in them. The merchant and Demolitionist are sitting in Maxx’s town because they don’t do the fighting.

  9. That ‘irony’ sound effect was brilliant.
    You’re good with sound effect humor
    Like that rabbit. That said ‘rabbit, rabbit’.

  10. Great comic! I love the choreography! Maxx does indeed have some amazing moves, and Cyril and Aley certainly hold their own XD Though it seems the leader of the vikings isn’t going to go down that easily o.o

  11. Man…Im so waiting until cyril will use the “Rabit Storm” :p Awesome comics
    Please do these more often 🙂

  12. Dedicating a whole comic to Cyril learning a spell would be a bit much, but adding a extra panel or two every now and then would be neat especially if spells are amusing like the ones in Progress Quest.

      1. All halfhearted explanations aside, I honestly never even think of which hand characters are using tools with. I just go with what will make the pose look the best, since otherwise the sprites would get even more confusing and less readable 😛

  13. Just from the “Tink” from the axe, I am guessing he used a spell that gives him the iron skin potion effect

    1. Well… the tink may be just the metal tapping on his bone. Take a screw-driver or something then tap it on your forehead. Makes a noise.

  14. It would be kinda cool if you could have Cyril learn some spells on screen, but not as a point of focus, like with smaller text and stuff. Kinda like that comic where Maxx finds out Cyril’s name and starts pondering about it being girly and stuff, while June and Hannah are talking about Cyril being dead as the main plot.

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